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Writing one sentence per line

Derek Sivers · 20 Jun 2022 · sive.rs

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  1. Writing one sentence per line, for your own eyes, improves prose more than any other habit.

    I've been doing it for twenty years, and it improved my writing more than anything else.
  2. A sentence that cannot justify a line of its own should be deleted.

    Delete any sentence not worthy of its own line.
  3. Weak openings like “I think” should be cut, and a sentence started on its subject and verb.

    Chop the weak beginnings, like “I think” and “Whether or not”. Start with powerful subjects and verbs.