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Writing one sentence per line

Derek Sivers · 20 Jun 2022

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  1. I've been doing it for twenty years, and it improved my writing more than anything else.
  2. Delete any sentence not worthy of its own line.
  3. Chop the weak beginnings, like “I think” and “Whether or not”. Start with powerful subjects and verbs.

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